Watermelon Love

This is quite a nice piece of work.
I can tell you tried when you were drawing it, which is a good sign.
What I should first point out is that it's hard to figure out what kind of atmosphere you were aiming for.
I suppose it's just you eating a watermelon, but there is nothing much to it.
Then there's the background.It's simple yet effective in my opinion, and I think it suits the picture well.
I like the colouting style.You're improving with every picture.
What I'd like to point out is that the hair doesn't seem to have a proper growth point, and the hair is coming out of a parting, rather than an actual point of growth.
I also can't really see a proper light source, but I suppose light is coming from in front of her.
The shirt is crumpled unnaturally around her shoulders, where they should really just be folding where the shoulder comes inward.
The skin also doesn't seem to be shaded properly, as each limb seems to have a different light source.
The legs are too long and too thin, and the feet are also as small as the hands, which is unnatural on a normal human scale.
Her fingers are also all the same size, which obviously isn't possible.
The watermelon is also jagged and unnaturally shaped, and the markings on it are blurry and hard to make out.That's not normally what the markings on a watermelon look like.
I should also point out that a watermelon becomes a more faded red as it get deeper, rather than the opposite.
The ears are too small.
Good job, though!These are all pretty common mistakes I see people making.
It's still a charming picture.